I think this is my fave poem ive rote so far enjoy!

I think this has an awesome meaning behind it and is also very true!! i give u a 4!

TAKE CARE,,

LOTA LOVEN,,

T!FF@N!

Good poem, may need some developing or restructuring in some places but is thats your style its great!
it has a wkd meaning behind it just like tiffan said. keep up the great work!
love jess XxXxXxXxXxXx

Cool. did you watch the miss america pageant? feed the models.

Aaaaaw gr8 poem keep up th gd work :)
~*~Yours-Truly~*~

OMG! I haven't commented it, but I'm positive I told you, this has to be one of my favourites of your poems, and anyones really. =] Keep writing NiNi!

Ye i like this one too
very powerful

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I love this poem, its awsome.

Oh,wow luv the ending!

I love your poem its really good keep writing! :)