Comments : Soon my heart will bleed..

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Wow Great poem 4 real i really enjoy reading your poem is very nice... I wish u da best in the relationship and i hope if it doen't come to an end but if it does this:

    When the day comes,
    The day we break up,
    My heart will bleed with blood,
    I just hope the world wont flood. ...

    I hope u never gio thru... take care keep writing =) 5/5...

  • 18 years ago

    by Nina Star

    Aww
    thts sad
    gd work
    keep it up
    nina
    vampire angel

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    Omg, this poem's superb.. That was wad happened to me and wad I was thinking a few months ago.. Now the guy I love has a girlfriend and it's not me. So cherish him while you have him now.. Dun ever end up like me! Good luck!! =)

    P.S. Take a look at my poems if you want.. Maybe they'll mean something to you, and who knows, you might like them! Take care.