Unfortunately thats how im feeling at the moment
great poem suz
have a great time too

Wow loved it. very powerful. i loved the repetition of the first line. it was beautiful

Ruby

Awesome work, I see your inspired. Perhaps not a good thing.
Missing you like hell, love you.

xoxo
Matt

Very well done. I loved this poem. It's excellent. And I am sorry but I just don't know what else to say. Just keep up the good work =) Lotsaaaa love! (also thanks for you comment, it meant a lot to me)

Hmm, awesome poem - I like the idea of the heavens breaking open - I guess thats the idea of God, getting angry? Nicely written.

Peace. [Sole]