by Katlynn Dec 3, 2005
category :
Special events /
christmas
Christmas is coming. |
This is a good poem. Good and sad topic. The only change I would have made is to make it rhyme more, but you were probably going for the freeverse thing. Keep it up. |
Great poem yet so sad i love you |
That is a sad poem |
Yeah this was very moving. Whoa it was deep!!! Great poem and keep it up!!! Fantastic!!! |