Yeah this was very moving. Whoa it was deep!!! Great poem and keep it up!!! Fantastic!!!
luv jess xoxo

That is a sad poem
but well written

Great poem yet so sad i love you

This is a good poem. Good and sad topic. The only change I would have made is to make it rhyme more, but you were probably going for the freeverse thing. Keep it up.

Tiffany.xox.