In the End

by Fallengod667   Dec 4, 2005


The Solder fights,
and carries on,
Till all is said and done.

But in the end,
who can say,
Just what his battle won.

Cuz maybe he,
had won the fight,
Maybe the whole war.

But in the end,
He came away,
Broken, Tattered, and torn.

He lost his friends,
and family life,
Nothing is the same.

Cus in the end,
his bodies strong,
but his minds completely maimed.

We welcome them,
We give them love,
for doing awful things.

But in the end,
what can we give,
to take the pain away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xLaurax

    That's beautiful. You wrote it very well.

    -aera-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Awww, true. Great poem! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

    Much Love!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Awesome poem really well written and I agree with what VioletRaven and Chantelle said it was deep and true you really know how to write keep it up! And thank for your comment really appreciate it! ^_^

  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Deep and true. I like the end being a rhetorical question, it really makes the reader think about it.
    Great poem
    *VioletRaven*

  • 19 years ago

    by Chantelle

    This poem was really good and quite true. Great work

    Love Chantelle
    xx

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