This one was gd 4/5 keep goin you are talented

I like it very much

I rated this at a 4 because it is a good poem I like it but the flow of it is off. I understand the subject of it witch is good. I can see emotion in it also a good thing. But the composition if it is off. GOOD JOB

OMG i love this poem your are really good at poetry You could totally feel the pain and sorrow and very great details on it SO GREAT JOB

Great poem 5/5 if you get the chance to read some of mine i would really appreciate it

Wow this is really good. i know how you feel. my bf dumped me cuz i worried too much, but if he just told me i wouldve changed. i wouldve done anything for him. so i know how it feels. good poem
lauren

I like this poem very much:) good explanations about how you felt.
you wrote what I feel inside..
greetings Jacintha

This poems rele gd... x o x o x o x

These r reali gid huni xx