Let's go back to the beginning

by myxlittlexcut   Dec 4, 2005


Let's go back to the beginning
to when it first started
then skip to the end
where you left me broken hearted

then compare the two
to see how we lost it all
... do you remember the moment
i proved my love in that bathroom stall?

i was blindly in love
and naive till the end
i thought we'd forever be
girlfriend and boyfriend

but what was once so pure
was stained by your hand
and nothing turned out
the way i had planned

your passion burnt out
and to you i no longer mattered
you stabbed my heart and ran
leaving me emotionally battered

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  • 18 years ago

    by Valentin

    Deep, i cant find any word to describe it.. but i luv it. the feeling that it releases, touches me inside.

  • 18 years ago

    by MizCrowley

    Yes, I agree with Keon, couldnt of said it better. I loved this one too.

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, that was so sad, but such a powerful poem, really well written! 5/5,
    take care,
    lots of luv,
    xxEmmaxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by K

    Im sorry to hear that... I wish I could help... I was always told to never make someone your all bcuz when they are gone you are left with nothing... I dont believe that bcuz my gurl is my all. But back to your poem. I like the way you took it from the beggining to the end in such a short poem. Keep up the good work!!!!

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