Im sorry to hear that... I wish I could help... I was always told to never make someone your all bcuz when they are gone you are left with nothing... I dont believe that bcuz my gurl is my all. But back to your poem. I like the way you took it from the beggining to the end in such a short poem. Keep up the good work!!!!

Wow, that was so sad, but such a powerful poem, really well written! 5/5,
take care,
lots of luv,
xxEmmaxxx

Yes, I agree with Keon, couldnt of said it better. I loved this one too.

Deep, i cant find any word to describe it.. but i luv it. the feeling that it releases, touches me inside.