That was excellent. I've found that the love poems I've read recently just make me feel heart break all over again, or get me ready for the thing that I think I suspect to happen soon...And this poem was really good at making me feel it which means you got your feelings across great. It's hard to put feelings into word like that. Well done.

I really like the message this poem, since I was going through this about a week ago; although the way the words came together felt like it was just randomly written. Like, there was no actual "rythm" the words would have come. Still good, though.

Hmm.. if i was any good a critiquing i would say something but im not so.. to me its good.

Wow.. I can tell that all this came straight from ur heart.. the poem jus flows naturally.. it didn't have to rhyme to express the meaning in it.. great job in writing this one! =)

Hmmm....can totally relate to this poem...*sighs*

Yeah, guys never seem to realize (or at least admit to themselves) that they make mistakes. And let me tell you...It will always hurt. Or at least for me, it's still hurting a YEAR after I stopped talking/seeing to him. And I'm still hoping that he'll figure things out. But as you said,
"I cry myself to sleep every night
Waiting for you to call
Just because I know you wont..."

Anyway back to your poem. You certainly know how to use poetry to get your feelings across to the reader. :)

Omg fantastic poem alot of heart felt sentances and i know how you feel trust me pain and hurt just really don't describe what you actually feel inside, there are alot of good love poems but this is amazing keep up the good work and thanks for commenting on my poem