OMG i love this poem, thanks for commenting on my poem as well and one more surprize the guy i wrote about in my poem was named Adam as well. anyway great poems

Good poem.

What else can I say? This is complete and nice.

Great poem it is full of emotion adn feeling and thats' what I look for in poetry.
~~Sweetie

Wow, what a dep and sad poem! hope it aint true! beautiful with a good flow...keep it up!
xxx
plz r/r/c mine too...thanx!

Awe wow...i know what you're going through and i'm sorry its a horrible feeling. Great poem though!! You're talented.

WOW - thats like amazing talent you have there. Well done!!! BTW I hope things improve =)

Beautiful touching and deep
love
amy

Nice job on the writing and i was touched by it because my bf and i had an age difference as well, can i ask how old u and him were?... jus curious. neways, nice job. i really like ur poems. 5/5

This is very good my fav stanza was

And I've decided tomorrow's that day,
And I'll carry scars from last night,
Thought's racing through my mind,
Thinking this isn't right,

that just wounded so cool!! haha 5/5 keep up the good work