WOW !!!
I loved this, it's very imagintive, the description and use of words are amazing.

"wear halos of gnats, spit blood through ebony smiles,
smoke cigarettes, embers flare in red coal eyes"

I especially liked this part, i think it really emphasises the darkness of this poem.
I hope you write more like this cos i really enjoyed it.

xxx cici xxx

I liked reading that. :)

Great poem keep it up
I loved how you worded it out it was so so I cant find a word but it was greatly excellntly amazingly good
lol sorry
thanks
Em