We sat on the beach

I hope your frendship lasts because i no how it feels to loose a freind and it hurts, i moved countries and school more than you have fingers to count. well i liked the poem also different from your other poems. with the others i sense every feeling you have and i get the feeling that u have written with passion but in these two that seems tyo be missing, might just be me thou. please don't take offense still think they are good. 4/5