Treacherous thoughts

by AlexJ   Dec 4, 2005


Giving in for the temptation
to reach the realms of reality
finding a path to purity
and know the true sensation

Searching for the suffering
knowing what you'll find
the sweetness of peace of mind
From the fear of never ending

Treacherous is the cynical voice
chanting verses in you're head
forsaken, all that's good is dead
A silence extinguish the hypnotic noise

Vaguely you are waking up
from custody of life's construction
the consequence is self destruction
for ignorance you're signing up

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    You did a great job once again. This poem is amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Again I like the description in this piece and the ffort taken in it composing.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    This is nice..wow, that is one intimidating vocabulary!
    I enjoyed the words, it was strange when I stringed them together, but the words themselves, just the phrases, were enjoyable.
    Nice work!

    //Truest Lies//

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    It is fully of meaning and very powerful. Great job :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel Hendrix

    Reality is a confusing subject to think about

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