Into My Depression

by metuka   Dec 4, 2005


I'm falling in the dark alone
I hear no noise, just silence
I feel that no one cares I'm gone
The people are so mindless

I thought I have so many things
Family, a lot of friends
Happiness I thought it brings
But I didn't understand...

I'm standing on a cliff
I think it's better to give up
The only thing I had - belief!
But it is not enough

I'd killed myself
To make them pay
I'd killed myself
To see their tears today!

Without faith an hope
Not dead and not alive
That what they did to me
And now I won't be free...

This feeling remains
No matter what you do
Even if they suffer
Your soul will suffer too!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow!! mindblowingly depressing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This was a very good poem that expressed a lot of ideas and feelings... the rhyming was a smidge rough though... like in this part" I thought I have a lot of things
    A family, so many friends
    Happiness you think it brings
    But no one understands..."

    i think that you were trying to make this rhyme but it didnt excactly flow... and in this line "But it's not enough"
    try making it's it is not... it might make your poem flow just a small bit more... but that is only my honest opinion... over all nice job though....

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    There's something about this poem that I just can't figure out.
    I love it.
    It has a lot of feeling into it
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem. I can really relate to it. I like the second stanza the most.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Very true! Great job. 5/5

    -Taylor

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