by Jerry Scott Dec 4, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I hide behind a smile |
by DiscoBore234
I get really excited when I read someone's work who has real talent. And that you have my dear. Keep writing, you're really good at it! |
by Nici
I'm glad I read this poem, it was full of emotion and worked really well. |
by Baby B
I really like this poem. I feel the same way just from a womens perspective. Well written. You write with your heart.. I like that. Great job |
by Juls
Its so sweet, and dont think that you are not maculane when you cry, everybody has feelings and expresses them differently and everyone crys! Great work though and keep it up! |
I like this poem...your feelings were portrayed subtley, yet powerfully. I enjoyed the part "I miss you when with you"....that makes perfect sense to me. Good job. |