That's so sad... but i know you can win this battle. never give up. and yeah... smile when you feel like crying. it feels a lot better.

Oh my gosh, I got chills from this poem. I can relate to it so much, and the way you expressed your words was amazing. You're a great writer, and I love the way you ended this. Great job! =)

Omg that is so me right there! Great poem! Thanks for commenting my poem "dear santa"

Very sad poem, i liked your use of words, you write very well.

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Wow...amazing poem!!! very inspirational. i'm very proud of you for not giving up :D life will get better. take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

I am amazed at what this poem captures. Its so relatable. I think there are a lot of us out there that feel that way still alone in a crowd of friends. I think thats the worst alone feeling. I like the idea of u reflecting on urself... i actually have a poem like this one called sad eyes and I think yours surpasses mine gracefully. PS thanx for ur comment

Hey girl , pretty good poem.I like it.It sounds alot like me right now.Kewl kewl , alot of good describing words , it tells a story. I like it keep up the good work. And if u get the chance vote/comment/both on mine. Thanx ttyl.

Wow girl thats such a good peom.thincks for the comment on mines poem i do agree with u 100 percent but u is such a good write i can totel relate. keep writeing and i will contuin to looken at ur poems i can relate to most of them so good job and write be back and commit on more plz thinmcks o and i gave u a 5

That is a beautiful poem.. you're a very talented writer, and i can tell you speak from your heart..i loved this poem. it sounds a lot like myself.. its actually kind of scary. . but keep up the great work, and i look forward to reading future poems..
rachel

"but alone she has no weapon,
no reason to hide her fears,
she lets it all go,
she lets it all out,
she lets her heart bleed,
and lets herself drown."
i love that so much, this is the best poem i ve read in such a long time, if you dont mind i think ill print it out and show some of my friends, since its what ive been trying to say but suck so bad at! just tell me if i can! thanx for the comment, ill keep reading your stuff, and maybe we can comment back and forth. 5/5, thanks

*hugs*

one day it WILL get better... and besides, the mirror is lying. it shows you something you dont want to see. sometimes it's better to look BEHIND the mirror.

(I actually made a poetry collection for school called that)

Brilliant poem. really expressive and effectivly written.

Very well written poem, flows very smoothly, and I felt the depression of this poem, it was very great, I only wish I could write poems like this : ) 5/5

I really liked this. I can relate to it in a lot of ways. feelin like you've lost your whole world but having pretend that it didn't hurt and you're fine... you're a very talented writer, don't stop writing... i expect more poems and will be back! Thanx for the comment!

Wow.
thats abesolutely .. breathtaking.
it left me thinking.
it sent shivers down my spine.
that was .. incredible.
such emotion was put into this..
keep writing.
you have abilities beyond ..