Comments : My story

  • 18 years ago

    by Chong

    I really love this poem because I can relate to it. right now I feel like I want to die because of the hurtful pain in my heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Awesome poem I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    Hey that's one of the BEST poems i've ever read and it describes me perfectly!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Something has a hold of me

    Holy crap this is amazing wow. i really liked this. i can tell it is coming from your heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Great poem 5/5 sometimes i wonder if guys are really worth all the pain they cause.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxItalianxXxBeautyxX

    Thats really sad but really good. It remindes me of what I went through with guys...there all dogs....cant live with them cant live without them....keep up the great work...!
    sami

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Great Poem

  • 18 years ago

    by eliza

    Your story sounds just like mine, i'm sorry to know that some one else flls my pain, but all thoese things have been done to me by the one guy i have been with for 15 mounths.... Things will get better...

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's been long since I read ur poems...I'm glad I can read them again...well...the first time I read them...they are magnificent...now...it's just a masterpiece...

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew

    One of the best poems of read

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharayah

    Awwe That Has Got To Be The Best Written Poem I Have Ever Seen Nice Job! I 100% understand you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Pretty good, in some stansas the words could flow a bit more, but the emotions still come through, enough for me to almost cry. good job, maybe read my stuff sumtime its not too good, but its what i feel! thanx, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMyThanatosXx

    Simply exquisite. Even now I hold my fingers to my lips, and I cry. My stomach is taught and I feel as if I’m dying inside. In ways I understand, in ways I can only guess and attempt to comprehend, but none the less, its painfully beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Oh my gosh, Amazing poem, I loved every line, It was creative, and unique, I loved how you put it in your own perspecitive and not like every other poem, It was truely one of the best poems I've read in a long time, amazing job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Viki

    WoW.......... that hits home. it is so powerful that i must say i dropped a tear for you....... i hope you keep writing. your poems are great.

  • 18 years ago

    by kelly waldron

    I love it . great depth to it

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    I love your poetry! You are an amazing writer! All of the poems I've read are so deep and full of emotions, that's what it takes! Keep it up!