Nice since i have never heard the full song but i like the words. Oh yeah... I like you...hahahaha, just kidding. Or am i????

~Matt~

Very long but very intersting poem...hope to read more..

Wow I like this one a lot, you use a lot of different words to rhyme. It's nice to see rhyming poets who can do more than "see, he, me, free" I liked it a lot, and this one is deep and got me thinking, Great job.