by Borana Dec 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
You were my only hope |
by Borana
Thank you very much for your comment. But this really didn't happen to me. It happened to my sister and I thought I should put myself in her shoes and write a poem about it. When I showed it to my sister she started crying. But thank you again. |
by monika
JUST LIKE TO SAY THAT IS A VERY UPSETTING POEM BUT THEN THAT MAKES IT GOOD BECAUSE IF A GOOD WRITER MAKES THE READER FEEL THE WAY THE WRITER FEELS THEN THEY ARE DEFINETELY BRILLIANT AT WRITING I BELIEVE THAT WHAT YOU WROTE WAS TRUE AND REALLY DID HAPPEN TO YOU SO IM REALLY SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS JUST HAND IN THERE ALL THE BEST. |