Dear santa,

by Laura Ash   Dec 4, 2005


Dear Santa,
I've been a good girl
I hope you saw
When you were looking down at the world

Santa I don't want money
I saved all mine
Santa I don't want a watch
I don't care about time

Santa I don't want a camera
I got memories in my heart
Santa I don't want that beautiful bag
It'll just rip apart

Santa I don't want a new cell phone
I get a new one every year
Santa I don't want clothes
It just helps me wipe my tears

Santa I don't want an ipod
I've got music in my soul
Santa I don't want a puppy
I've got one I can't control

Yes Santa
I know I asked for these things in the past
But now what's the point?
It will never last!

It won't last forever
Or till the end time
I want the perfect guy,
That will love me and forever be mine!

Comments and ratings are appreciated because I just wrote this poem when I was submitting it. ;]
Written on December 4, 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, i think you have voiced what everygirl wishes for. dont you wish santa was real? and that he could give us a love ot remeber forever something to keep us happy till hte end of our days? well its always good to wish but y not wish for somethings that about to happen like death sya. im sorry im bieng morbid again. well its a great poem that expresses your feelings kind of with a good sense of rhyme

  • 18 years ago

    by Kel*bel

    Great job! love ur style

  • 18 years ago

    by ash

    Thats rly good!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0mg i really l0ved this p0em. what a beautiful piece. i l0ved the way its been written the wh0l 'i dun wana ip0d.. i d0nt wana cell ph0ne..' and s0 0n =)
    very well written darl. great j0b! well d0ne!
    thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk! it meant s0 much t0 me! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow thiz iz a beautiful poem!!! keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

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