Wow thiz iz a beautiful poem!!! keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

0mg i really l0ved this p0em. what a beautiful piece. i l0ved the way its been written the wh0l 'i dun wana ip0d.. i d0nt wana cell ph0ne..' and s0 0n =)
very well written darl. great j0b! well d0ne!
thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk! it meant s0 much t0 me! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Thats rly good!!!

Great job! love ur style

Wow, i think you have voiced what everygirl wishes for. dont you wish santa was real? and that he could give us a love ot remeber forever something to keep us happy till hte end of our days? well its always good to wish but y not wish for somethings that about to happen like death sya. im sorry im bieng morbid again. well its a great poem that expresses your feelings kind of with a good sense of rhyme