P.S. Note to reader, this poem has a deeper significance than just another obvious meaning... You just have to think metaphorically to understand what I'm saying about the world, and how hatred is strong enough to... make an angel fall.... Hope you all get it lol, if any questions or just wanting to express opinion about this, leave a comment :)

Wow. that is so great. it expresses such feeling. You're a great writer. Keep up the good work.

Heyy this was an awesome right im happy to hav commented ur poiems 5/5

This is great work...:P a comment would be very appreciated xoxo love

For This Poem To Be Miscellaneous It Speaks So Loudly! I Loved It 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

It's a good write. Well done. It's deep.. =) Keep up the good work.. xxx

Good work, I really like this poem and the repeatation of
Lost and wandering
Through mystic rain
I travel the city
And feel no pain
at the end really worked nicley.

Hey, I really really loved this poem. you have talent.5/5

That was grrt. metaphors and all, u couldnt hav done better. i looo0ooooooooooooooooveed it!!! write more...... could u comment on some of mine if u get the time??

Excellent.
"Lost and wandering
Through mystic rain
I travel the city
And feel no pain"
i think that was my favorite part of the poem.