No Matter...

by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~   Dec 5, 2005


This is completely screwed,
We are lost and confused,
Every way we turn every step we taken,
Our hearts are torn and bruised.

It was both our fault,
Each others love we did insult,
Threw it in their face and turned our backs,
An arrow through our hearts was the result.

Every decision we make has a price,
We made our own choice and took no advice,
Our passion become cold, the lust was gone,
Our love has turned as cold as ice.

Trying to move on and start anew,
We made mistakes just trying to forget us two,
But through it all and everything we did,
The others face we could see, voices we could hear; standing true.

No matter how hard we try,
No matter what the lie,
No matter what the other says,
Their presence in our hearts we cannot deny.

There are people all around we can see,
Even the best friend next to you and me,
Their voices echoing in our heads,
*Get away while you can, you need to be free*.

So here we are, finding it impossible to stay,
Slowly drifting our separate way,
Leaving behind everything we had,
I cant believe we are both turning away.

*Written after John and I broke up the 2nd time*
*One of my first eva poems*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    I loved this poem. It has so much feeling in every single stanza. I loved the way it flowed. I can relate to this feeling, perhaps thats the reason I loved it so much. You've done a great job here. 5/5. Thanks for leaving such an inspiring comment. It was very much appreciated.

  • 18 years ago

    by Larry

    Good poem -- you might find it beneficial to simplify sentences when you write. For instance, when you wrote "we made our own choice with no advice" you could have simplify it by replacing the words "with no" with the word "without". It gives it the same meaning and it won the same amount of syllables -- but you are getting rid of needless words -- consider being completely direct with their sentences -- rewording them may help. Also, would you consider adding me to your favorites list? Will you read the rest of my poetry, vote, and comment. I'll make you a deal -- for every poem of mine you vote and comment on -- I will flow and comment on two of yours -- also, do you belong to a club? If so, which one?

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    This is such a great poem, I loved it!!
    ~~sweetie

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