This is such a great poem, I loved it!!
~~sweetie

Good poem -- you might find it beneficial to simplify sentences when you write. For instance, when you wrote "we made our own choice with no advice" you could have simplify it by replacing the words "with no" with the word "without". It gives it the same meaning and it won the same amount of syllables -- but you are getting rid of needless words -- consider being completely direct with their sentences -- rewording them may help. Also, would you consider adding me to your favorites list? Will you read the rest of my poetry, vote, and comment. I'll make you a deal -- for every poem of mine you vote and comment on -- I will flow and comment on two of yours -- also, do you belong to a club? If so, which one?

I loved this poem. It has so much feeling in every single stanza. I loved the way it flowed. I can relate to this feeling, perhaps thats the reason I loved it so much. You've done a great job here. 5/5. Thanks for leaving such an inspiring comment. It was very much appreciated.