This feeling

by CourtneyLouxxx   Dec 5, 2005


There's this little feeling
That I feel up in my heart
I don't know what to do
It's tearing me apart

I want to ignore it but I can't
I want to stop this feeling inside
But it won't go away
I can't make it hide

I want to make this happen
I really really do
But somehow it can't be done
I don't know why but it's true

I want to tell you about this feeling
But I know you'll think I'm insane
But when I think about it all, I think of you
It's making me cause so much pain

I want the world to know what I feel
But it's hard just to tell you what I think
I know you love another but I can't help but say
Afterwards who would be your next link?

I don't know what attracts me to you
All I can say is there are many things I like
I want these things to be heard
We have noting in common we are not alike

I guess it's the make up of our destiny
That we'll sometimes feel this way
I just hope that day is soon
And I'll be waiting for you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh hun h0w meaningful. i think al0t 0f pe0ple can relate t0 this 0ne. beautifully written! great j0b! keep up the g0od w0rk! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Aww! means a lot I can tell good one girly

    sammi x

  • 18 years ago

    by PrincessCatalina

    Good job! keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandra C

    I think your poem is quite good! Honestly it was wonderful. I did however loose track at a few places. Sometimes you had a really long line then a very short line, and then a middle lenght one, it screwed up my rythym when I was reading it. I think poems flow better if you can make it long line/ then short line or try to make them all the same. It's very hard to do but your obviously talented enough to give it a try. I loved the message in your poem, keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandra C

    I think your poem is quite good! Honestly it was wonderful. I did however loose track at a few places. Sometimes you had a really long line then a very short line, and then a middle lenght one, it screwed up my rythym when I was reading it. I think poems flow better if you can make it long line/ then short line or try to make them all the same. It's very hard to do but your obviously talented enough to give it a try. I loved the message in your poem, keep up the good work!

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