That was very cute, and i hope to read more..keep it up. don't be fazed by comment like that of above!! a comment would be very appreciated xoxo love

Nice!!!

This is a very sweet poem..it is fantastic. keep up the good work!!

I loved it!!! I like it when guys can write like this, and NO, it's not girly!!! you did a great job. don't let comments like what broken hearted wrote get you down, they must have been smokin somethin when they were reading your poem, cuz it was awesome! Will you please read some of my poems? like, Christmas Love, or Under The Stars. Thanks! Much Love, and again, GREAT JOB!!!

This is a good poem

Great poem i really liked it!

--Clare

Again very cute! lol its easy to see you really like that girl! ...maybe theres hope 4 the rest of us then lol 5/5 for the poem! jesx

Ur very good.
ur girl is very lucky.

Made me blush a little. :-) Such a sweet poem!