by ShadowDancer Dec 5, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
We were all sitting around a table |
WOW, Excellent write.. im amazed.. I can feel this one so greatly, I would do the same .. great job!!! |
Omg, i remember this one, its so beautiful, i absolutely love it! |
Your poem held alot of emotion and it was worth the reading loved the way it rhymed and it was just awesome! Keep it up you have talent! |
by Sole
Wow - as I got to the part where she asks of anyone would give up their life - I was thinking, I have played something along thses lines over in my head so many times - Excellent poetry :) |
Your a natural you left me and suspence and actually felt like if I |