Wow!!
i m speechless...this is amazing...great piece of work dear

i m simply speechless

Wow that is great...keep up the great work!

Wow.
By the time I finished this poem I was on the verge of tears.
I loved it.
5/5

Hey! great poem... =D thanks for checking out my poems.. hugs from me... 5/5!

OH MY GOD !!!!!! This perfect, wonderful, EXCELLENT .Words can't explain . 5/5

You just became one of my fav .
xoxoxo

Ok I am also speechless so I shall type the words im thinking
OMFG that was . . .awsome so perfectly worded
how do you think these up?
YOur already in my favorites and if I could put you in twice I would
THank you for sharing your gift
lol
Em

Great poem! SO long but worth the read. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

Besides a few of the lines I can completely relate to this poem. Thank you very much for sharing.

Wow... this was amazing! congrads on a great write! i absolutly loved this you did a wonderful job! if your not already in my favorites i think that you have earned a place! keep it up!

sammie

It is often said that love conquers all. I feel that when true love is found you will never think twice about giving your life for theirs. I guess that may be why I am still single ... lol ...

---Sher

Wow...this brot out a lot of emmtion...such wonderful descriptions!!! 5/5 4 SURE!!!

~*Who Cares?*~

That was an awesome story or love and pain, I couldnt stop reading it.
Excellent work, keep it up.

5/5
Darkest Wishes,
Matt

Brilliantly told story and very well expressed emotions.

5/5

Omg Im in tears. Thats amazing how well you got my emotions wrapped up in this story/poem. Not many can do that well but you did and..and just wow! great work and keep it up

Juls

Very good, your rhymes are perfect, i love the making of the words, beautifully written

This poem was so amazing. It had such great emotion in it. You did a really fantastic job writting this poem.

That is a truly touching and sad story. You placed the reader on the edge the whole time. Though I do wish to know the relationship between you and the guy.

Your flow was spectacular,
Your diction was good
Your content was weak in the beggining but the end, brought it home.

Your a natural you left me and suspence and actually felt like if I
was "seeing"it it was awesome work keep it up you are now one of my favorites!

Wow - as I got to the part where she asks of anyone would give up their life - I was thinking, I have played something along thses lines over in my head so many times - Excellent poetry :)

Peace. [Sole]