2nd chance!

by hm   Dec 5, 2005


I sit in a dark room silently
shocked of words i can not speak
Ive Neva felt so powerless
and my body so weak

Ur power has pushed my body
and left me here
so scared to move
my soul n spirits filled of fear

I'm so shocked of Wat has happen
n the actions u have done
days go on and years pass
and I'm left here as the forgotten 1

then 1day u cum 2 my house
and cum running throw my door
u ignore my family and see my lying nearly dead on the floor

u reach down to me
and check 2 hear me breathe
ppl camming shouting out
but u refuse 2 leave

2 his surprise
he see I'm still alive
was all i surround is blood
and Sharpe knives

u pick me up
and stripe me from head 2 toe
u see the bruises and scars
that haunt us coz they wont go

u get new clothes
and put them on me
u whisper in my ear
today is the day u will be set free

u put me on Ur shoulder
and take me to a new home
u say it strongly as if its true
that Ur here and I'm never alone

i finally reach 4 words
"i have fallen to deep this time"
u strongly reply
u can never fall deep so have a 2nd chance
so u will be fine

i love you
are the words you say
I'm giving you a second chance and a new life starting from 2day!

Hi peoples the start feels true and is about my dad and the second part is like a dream that same dream lover will give me a second chance coz he loves me everthing will be okay!hope u ppl liked it!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Ya i loved this poem! it was sad... but in the end it wasnt that sad

  • 18 years ago

    by MissAlotta

    This is very good 5/5~ keep up the great writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Good poem! love the way you wrote it, 5/5! xx

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  • 19 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Hold on to your dreams!
    Love the idea, well done ;)
    *VioletRaven*