Hey, I noticed that this one wasn't commented on but they didn't give you such a nicevoting on it, whereas I really like it, so I'll raise the number a bit ;). Anyway, I think the reason other ppl may not like it(and I don't mean to be cruel, I just though I'd help you out, because it realy is a good poem and you could be getting better votes than that.) is, well for starters the first line, doesn't quite make sense.
I promised myself I never again would fall
You must think me weak, but I canâ??t stand tall
It's basically saying that you promised yourself to be tough, someone else thought you were weak 'but' ur not strong... lol which means they were right, so you may want to use ''because' I can't stand tall'.. I hope you know what I mean, and if it is just me making a wrong interpretation than I am sorry... And I know it's really hard to keep up the rhyming, but you did such an awesome job with it to begin with, it's just the last verse that stops.. Anyway, that's my two cents, other than that I loved it and will be reading some more of ur work when I have time, Keep it up! :)

:o i'm gonna have a word with u missy

No! never ever again cut, turn to the phone and call me or turn to door adn run here! just don't hurt yourself girl

sammi xxx

Hey
by me saying anything mite not help.......but jus want u to knw.......even thou wer not mates doesnt mean i dont love u.......and my lifes already fallin apart witout u in it.......if the day comes wen ur completely not in in then.......i'll b dying more each day:( nice poem thou.