Heyy this is really good i liked all the wording 5/5 for this its awesome and true

Wow. Honestly, I don't usually read the poems when people ask me to, but i felt like being nice. Instead, it was more nice of you to ask me to read it, it's great. I love the main idea of it, and the wording. Great job.
5/5

You captured the true version of the world we live in today instead of giving the shitty " everything is perfect" story.
i love the honesty in this poem. 5/5

btw, i love your work!

-Kimmy