Hidden Promises

by End Of Eternity   Dec 5, 2005


Hidden promises behind my lies
fake smiles cover my desperate cries

i need that shot in my vein again
i need to fly and never look back in pain

some years back even i was a fighter like you
used to live to love and loved my life like you do

how insane i sound now to my own ears
my flesh still crumbles thinking of all those years

this soul i carry inside me is getting so heavy
how violent i become but it just doesn't leave me

these games of life i nomore wish to play
just last race of my life, if i could reach my clay

as long as i keep on mixing things with my blood
i know the memories will fade of my childhood
and then as the past will slowly earse
the night will overshadow my miserable days

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Your poems seem to get more intense with each one I read. Excellent piece.

    how insane i sound now to my own ears
    my flesh still crumbles thinking of all those years

    Wow these lines are gut wrenching.

    as long as i keep on mixing things with my blood
    i know the memories will fade of my childhood
    and then as the past will slowly earse
    the night will overshadow my miserable days

    Your sadness and pain cry from your words.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This is another fantastic poem, def 5/5 keep writing,thanks 4 your comment, meant alot take care sarah.

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Brilliant poem, especially the opening lines. Try mixing love with your blood other than 'things' and you just might be surprised that love itself can overshadow your miserable days.
    (just an advice) lol...

    Great job on the poem!

    Love
    Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi
    that's really sad but let me tell u that it was very nicely written. i liked it. how clearly u can bring down ur pain to words. good job. keep it up!!!!!!!
    bharti

  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh this is so sad, but written so beautifully! I love your words, their fantastic! Great write!

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