Wow... so deep... makes me feel sad... but great write... filled with true emotions... loved it..

Love,
Ipsita

Woah i love this one its really deep and i can definetly relate alot keep up teh good work
xox

Hey great poem again and real deep...keep it up!!
:)
thanx again!

Awesome poem yet so so sad.
Chin up..i hope everything is ok
xoxo

This is my favourite from you...it's amazing...just perfect...

Oh this is so sad, but written so beautifully! I love your words, their fantastic! Great write!

Hi
that's really sad but let me tell u that it was very nicely written. i liked it. how clearly u can bring down ur pain to words. good job. keep it up!!!!!!!
bharti

Brilliant poem, especially the opening lines. Try mixing love with your blood other than 'things' and you just might be surprised that love itself can overshadow your miserable days.
(just an advice) lol...

Great job on the poem!

Love
Michelle

This is another fantastic poem, def 5/5 keep writing,thanks 4 your comment, meant alot take care sarah.

Nitin
Your poems seem to get more intense with each one I read. Excellent piece.

how insane i sound now to my own ears
my flesh still crumbles thinking of all those years

Wow these lines are gut wrenching.

as long as i keep on mixing things with my blood
i know the memories will fade of my childhood
and then as the past will slowly earse
the night will overshadow my miserable days

Your sadness and pain cry from your words.
Take Care Love Cindy