Comments : Everyday People

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    I liked how it ended, great job. 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Patiently Waiting~

    Good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Chit Cyn

    Facts of life...nice write, good rhythm, well structured, metre was accurate as to lines and syllables counts. And u did it well on rhymes, so consistent. Love it.