I love the 1st part so far...5/5 gurl

Awesome...:P going to read the others..this is interesting!!
xoxo

This is good I will read more but have to go for now. I'll be back later. Your poems are wonderful and full of emotion and feelings thats what makes a good poem to me.
~~Sweetie

Hey! Wow, i really like this!! Im excited to read the next ones!! you're really good.. and liek the other person said, i liek how you made it kind of into a story! Nice job!

I have a little constructive critisism for you . perhaps maybe when in the beginnig when your write as if your writing to your diary maybe when in the second stanza when you start saying you... perhaps you should change it to "he" ... just a thought..... to keep it the same and all.

Ooo im curious.....5/5 on this part!

~*Who Cares?*~

OMG!!!! i cant even explain how much of the same exact things happened to me and how i feel wow! its a great poem i really enjoyed it! :)

Wowa this is awsome i love how you set it out as a story!! 5/5