The Dream

by Miss Ashley   Dec 5, 2005


A shadowy world
Glum and gray
How all the faces
Fade away.

You've lost the battle
You've closed your eyes
Your mind somehow managed
To get untied.

Now it wonders
With no wheres to go
Skimming the memories
Of a past so long a go.

Your heart starts to race
You toss and turn
Your sheets act as a restraint
Against your flailing arms.

There you lay
In your bed
All these thoughts weaving through your head

As the hours fly by,
Your mumbles begin to turn to cries
All tears roll down your cheeks
And soak into your pillow deep.

Then comes a warmth
So foreign, so new
Chases away the shadows
That have been haunting you

Then slowly you're able
to open your eyes
And once again
The beautiful sun rised

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I loved this one from you! I liked the rhythm and the beat that flows when you read it out loud. It was plain pleasure to read this one and I think you ought to get a 5/5 on this from me (: Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem...but i feel it is a bad topic. It truely is a same that good things happen to bad people and bad things happen to good people, I guess that is the way the world is ment to fuction.

    I Liked the poem and gave it a Five/Five for the fact that your metaphores were pretty direct and your pattern was abit off but i found you stuck to it very well.

    Dark Savior
    "Life is a disease and Death is the cure"
    Dark Savior(Just some random thought/quote from me)

  • 18 years ago

    by edy

    Ash! that was AWSOME! i loved it!!!!

    ~eddy~

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Great Poem!! LOVED IT!! HYPERNESS!! lolz sorry. I loved this poem great flow and everything!!
    LOVE YA!!
    Je t'aime,
    HJ

  • 18 years ago

    by RObC

    Excelnt

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