Comments : My pain so high, by blood so red

  • 18 years ago

    by Unbreakable

    I'm sorry that your life isn't fair. No one deserves to be treated that way. But there's 2 ways you can be from it. You can become something and be a better person who doesn't take life for granted, or you can continue drinking and doing drugs and bury yourself deeper until you can't get out. It's up to you

    *Brittany

  • 18 years ago

    by bj

    I realY Like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Your not alone.......I'm feeling like that too but the only thing you can do is just hope that it will get better that is what I've been doing for the past 12 years.........it will get better.......it just needs your help......I like your poem:) it expresses your feelings...good job:) I like it:)

    -Ashley***Don't forgot to comment on my poems:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Your not alone.......I'm feeling like that too but the only thing you can do is just hope that it will get better that is what I've been doing for the past 12 years.........it will get better.......it just needs your help......I like your poem:) it expresses your feelings...good job:) I like it:)

    -Ashley***Don't forgot to comment on my poems:)

  • 18 years ago

    by loves lost angel

    Aww im sorry sweetie that your life isnt fai r but i know what your going through i hope it gets better great poem 5/5 deff
    love always kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by loves lost angel

    Aww im sorry sweetie that your life isnt fai r but i know what your going through i hope it gets better great poem 5/5 deff
    love always kayla

    dont forget to comment on a few of my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by theRookienamedKate

    Wow. Strong, deep, good. I encourage you to keep your emotions down on paper. Take care.