I love your usage of words...interesting poem...but it kinda get twist here and there...well...still think it's good...love it...

Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!

Aha...I don't know why I read it again...guess it's very good lol...

WOW.....this is a tear breakin poem Im sorry you went through all that and hope things are better now....Excellent poem and well written 5/5 and thank you so much for the lovely comments :)

Nice words u got there, pretty darn good...

Its carzy how much our poems are alike!! LOL!! i wrote one almost jus like this about bein in the hospital and not knowin why and after she died she looked on the bed where she died and found the note that said "Cause of death, suicide"