Elucidation

by AlexJ   Dec 5, 2005


Silence behold my voice
slithering through empty space
yearning for a hiding place
from sever condemnation

Passing through the hidden walls
challenging unyielding laws
The strike of sudden reality
makes me wanna cry for eternity

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I loved this poem. It's short but gets the point across very well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    I like the fact that this piece doesn't go on for ever, but instead gets to the point quickly and describes it well.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Wow so short yet so powerful i loved this poem very good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Dark...really dark but i like it alot. like i said you are an amazing writer and I hope you go far with ur work someday

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Deep creepy and dark. brilliant.

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