Hey 2 of my friends just commited suicide and its sounds like you knew wat they were going through could you please tell me how you feel so i can understand bit more

I feel pretty much the same way.
I loved this poem.
5/5

Rock on buddy i like it... i like the writing and the style... i know how ya feel too. ever need me, i'm here... rock on!

Really great it makes me feel sory for the person i could feel all the emotion in it

I've felt like this everyday....ur right easier said than done....

This poem is so amazing. its deep and i agree with Kori about the stanza its sooo deep. i feel like this too...well i used to...my lifes gotten alot better.. thanks for the help in the boaeds..
xoxoCheRRyxoxo

Thank you all for your comments. i love this poem and im glad you enjoyed it, you can count on me to vote for you

Hi Nicc, you commented on one of my poems and so I got intrigued and began reading your work. I must say Nicc, the imagery is extremely vivid and biting, it definitely grabs a hold of you. But also keep in mind that writing should be something that can take you away from all this. I am a recovering self mutilator, and from experience I can tell you that these kinds of thoughts may look clear now, but try reading your own poems through someone else's eyes, and you can see that these thoughts do not capture your whole. I think you can be an extremely talented writer is you look beyond defining yourself through pain, and start thinking about how much you mean to others. Even kids who you just post one comment to. Thanks for reading, sorry if i got a little preachy. Talk to me sometime.

Oh, wow. So dark and touching (I know that sounded pathetic). All of your stuff that I've read thus far is really great and unusual, so I hope to see more :)