So this moment is yours
This moment is mine Lets
Take this moment now and
Make it that moment in time

LOVE that line... you did a great job with this poem, hun!!

Great poem i love it!! i agree with tinydancer46 that last bit ends it off so wickedly..:) great job mate...keep it up!:)
xx

Great poem. i only had one tiny problem, and that is the line:

"The change are self's" proabally just me been thick but i didn't understand this line *blush*

Excellente! I love this. It so accurately describes how people handle things it's amazing. I really love this.

Great job girl. keep it up. i hope everything works out for you.

~babygirl88~

WoW! Wonderfully put. This stanza:

So this moment is yours
This moment is mine Lets
Take this moment now and
Make it that moment in time

Is incredible. It says it all. Life is just a series of moments strung together like pearls on a necklace and making the most of moments is all we can ask for. Great write!

0h hun great p0em. very well written! great j0b. thanK u f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk it meant s0 much t0 me! =)

This is very heartfelt and emotional, I can tell that you believe in every single word that you write. The part that really got me was "The power to make one
Happy is all in the heart
Of the beholder", because that is one of my own principal beliefs. This is wonderfully stated, but sometimes gets confusing because of small grammar errors, like "Make it are own" = Make it our own. Great poem, keep it up.

Nice job, but again, try not to do:
Now and then we all
Get a chance for that
One moment in time

*it's like a connected sentence.
Thanks for your comment

Great poem, not my fav or your but still great

When I saw the title, I remember the song "One moment in time" not sure who by, but it was sweet. I really am starting to like the 3 line verses. One small problem, in the 5th Verse you wrote 'We're are' We're is short for We are, so it's like you're writing 'are' 3 times over. As for the rest of the poem. Super!! 5 :)

Wow, this is an excellent poem. It reminds me a lot about the Heartsongs by Matty Stepanek. Good work, 5/5.