Heart for a claim

by AngelJess   Dec 6, 2005


When it hurts
you think you can make it work
He takes your heart
and then it rips apart
there's a gap
Thu he decided to tap
you tried to make it better buy pretending to fake
the kindled heart just kept apart
you meet again and the heart came to leap for you to claim

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  • 18 years ago

    by leif Estenson

    I'm not sure what to say? It could use some work but it's a good start. You need to try and get things flowing a little better i think or it needs to be re-written with commas and such to get the flow down for the reader who is unfamiliar with the way its supposed to go. If u get a chance read mine. Once I'm gone I'm gone

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