Your emotions were felt!! Nicely written, the flow of your words went well together 5/5

Keep up the awesome work!

I am glad writing is still helping, and I can relate to not feeling so well of late as my poems show, and yeah. I've done lots of stupid things in the last little while and I tried to end it all because I thought I couldn't handle it either, but that's not the way to go, I can promise you that. I am so sorry you feel this way, I know that is sucks and I wish I could take it away from you and still have you be living after, but I can't do that and I am sorry for your pain. If you feel like it read my poem, Suicide through someone else's eyes, and see if that helps you any, if not, that's okay, just a suggestion. Good luck hunny, DON'T Give up hun, don't let go.

-mikochan

Hey hun.

What a lovely poem. I'm having tears in my eyes right now.

I would take your hand to show you all the beauty you possess if I could girl.

Very well writin girl. Very emotional.. I just don't know what to say hun! I'm sorry hun. I love you.

Take care hun, I'll lit a candle for you and hope for the best girl. Lotsaa love -xxx-

Aw, I'm sorry you feel that way.
Your poems are great and I love the way you find words to rhyme.
It'll get better.
I know everyone says that,
because they tell me that too.
But it really will.
5/5

I am on the verge of tears. you put so much emotion into you poems...ooh my goodness they are amazing.

Wow , that was amazing , i can realy relate . i haven't been feeling too good recently either ...it sucks , anyway keep writing , you're realy good

Very deep... can feel what u felt when u wrote this ! good work !!

Aw im am so sorry for whatever you have been going through. i really hope u feel better. this is a very good poem.

I loved this poem def 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x