So while you're away.

by avery   Dec 6, 2005


We ended peacefully,
And I'm glad it went that way,
I only want what's best for you,
Since you're going away,

Stay safe out there my love,
And don't forget about me,
Because I'll be thinking of you,
And how we were meant to be,

So when you're fighting for you life,
To make mine better,
I'll be sitting here writing to you,
And mailing you letters,

And if there's a moment in time,
When you're feeling down,
Put your mind on me,
And take away that frown,

We'll get through this together,
Even if we are apart,
Because nothing can split us,
And steal our hearts.

Copyright © Avery A.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow! i luv the flow of this poem its so smooth and the meaning is plain and simple, but intresting words put together for a gr8 sweet meaning! keep writing! :)
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I like this style better then the poems with the short lines. Great job

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. gr8 job wit this poem.. nice rhyme, and gr8 words.. v deep.. and i liked ur flow.. it was reli heart-felt.. and almost made me cry.. i gez u reli loved the guy (if it was true)..
    i so love ur last stanza
    keep it up
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    That was really beautiful!!! I'm curious to what exactly it was about!! But it was very touching and emotional!! Great job!!! Keep writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Beutifully said...keep it up!!
    xxx

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