Comments : So while you're away.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dumpstead

    Nice phrasing.

    I read through your profile and read some of your poems.

    All I have to say is taht you have written more poems in a year than I have in my life and they are good too.

  • I love this poem and i understand what u mean when u say everyword in this poem...keep up the great work and never change...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Umm this was a pretty good poem... well written... the ryming was a lil rough but over all it was pretty good.. keep it up

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Amazingly beautiful !!

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Beutifully said...keep it up!!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    That was really beautiful!!! I'm curious to what exactly it was about!! But it was very touching and emotional!! Great job!!! Keep writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. gr8 job wit this poem.. nice rhyme, and gr8 words.. v deep.. and i liked ur flow.. it was reli heart-felt.. and almost made me cry.. i gez u reli loved the guy (if it was true)..
    i so love ur last stanza
    keep it up
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I like this style better then the poems with the short lines. Great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow! i luv the flow of this poem its so smooth and the meaning is plain and simple, but intresting words put together for a gr8 sweet meaning! keep writing! :)
    xxx