COMMiTTeD?

by stephyG   Dec 6, 2005


I know I love him
He knows I care
he will do anything for me
I know hes always there
Together we are perfect
And everyone can see
something will happen eventually And forever we will be
but Is it normal to feel different?
is it OK to feel sad?
Sometimes I question the feeling
without freedom in my hands
I feel tempted to touch
But that I could never see
i could never hurt someone
that loves me as much as he
is it normal to want others?
Do something crazy on the spot
Temptation can be hard to resist
But after a while its been forgot
Just now its so hard
But I know he will be the one
But I'm only 17
And my life has just begun.

**I'm in a relationship and i really love my boyfriend, but sometimes i question the feeling of being committed and it makes me sad because i want to be free..is it normal to feel this way?.. please let me know your thoughts. -- Xxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by squirttt

    Great poem. and yes, it really is okay to feel that at times. it's normal to want to feel free even when you're with the one you love. but hey, if you're not happy in the relationship like you should and could be, then you know what you gotta do. and only you know what's best for you. take it easy. let us know if you need someone to talk to or anything. take care! keep up the great work also.

    gina

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    When I read your poem i felt as if it was me who wrote it. I totaly understand what you mean and as much as I wish I could help you with it, even I don't know the awnser to that question. I really care for the guy that i'm with too and I always catch myself asking questions about commitment. I'm so glad I'm not alone. Well writen poem! I love all your poems! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie Bennett

    Wow girl,. you are So talented. I loved this write. Keep it up, this is awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Well, I have been in that situation before where I wanted to feel free. It's bad, I lost the best thing that ever happened to me because of it. I was in love with her, and I didn't realize it. Stay in the relationship, and figure out if you want to spend time with him.

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