by Wings Of Flames Dec 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I am a house upon a hill about to face an end, |
I like poems that are a bit different, where concepts or words are turned about. I love the way you use language in non conventional ways. Keep it up. You are a true poet. Again, 5/5. |
To be completely honest and blunt, the rhymes were good... but the flow... it was hard to follow.. It could be because I'm really tired.. but I didn't understand some of the lines... such as: |
OMFG!!!!!! i will say now, in complete honetsy and truth, THIS IS MY FAVOURITE POEM IN TEH WORLD ADN THAT YOU AHEV EVER WRITTEN!!!!!! |