OMFG!!!!!! i will say now, in complete honetsy and truth, THIS IS MY FAVOURITE POEM IN TEH WORLD ADN THAT YOU AHEV EVER WRITTEN!!!!!!

It's, like, so awesome, so abstract, so meaningful, so powerful,.....so sad.

I LOVED it. i really really really want to see more of these poems from you Em, they are magnificent.

With love, Suzie

To be completely honest and blunt, the rhymes were good... but the flow... it was hard to follow.. It could be because I'm really tired.. but I didn't understand some of the lines... such as:
"So the house so weak feels no one does care,"
and a couple more... but other than that, I really liked the metaphor... it was very original.. and the description was very well-written.. Keep writing!

~BJ~

I like poems that are a bit different, where concepts or words are turned about. I love the way you use language in non conventional ways. Keep it up. You are a true poet. Again, 5/5.
Let the Force hang loose
Matt.