by Void Dec 6, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
science fiction
Lying here on cold wet soil, |
Short but very well written! keep up the good work! |
I think repeating reasons was fine..shows repetion and proves a point. the pint that there is, in fact, reasons for ressurection. even if there unknown. |
This is a really great poem!! I love it! I really think you should make it longer though, you could do so much more with this. Regardless, excellent poem! |
I loved the lasy two lines! 5/5 short but well written |